My Poor House
        My parents decided that they needed to get away from altogether their problems for a while. They planned a curt weekend field day to Ocean City Maryland. This was the first time they left my sis and I home alone, and they trusted us to take sizeable care of the house and keep everything under control. Late Friday afternoon at about five oclock was their time of departure. Before they correct pulled out of the garage, the supplies, for the party tonight, which we have been planning for a comfortably week, were already on their way over.
        As I waited for my friends to arrive, I took notice of how the house was so neat and clean. The fresh scent of simmering potpourri spilled out of the kitchen, where my mother had a little pot to the full of it.. The freshly painted walls were covered with portraits of family members and friends, which hung neatly in their fancy wooden frames. The fibers of the recently vacuumed carpet stood at attention displaying how clean they were. The varnished oak coffee- disconcert glistened as the lunar month shined through the crystal clear window reflecting off its easily glossy finish. All the furniture was aligned perfectly with the correspondence of the room, like a life size geometry proof. My mothers knickknacks were arranged neatly in their proper order on top of the pleasure center. All of our CDs and tapes were put away in their correct sight behind the clear glass door of the entertainment center. The kitchen table was clear of clutter, and the sink was empty, accept for the drying rack in the set partition.
Then the doorbell started to ring, and the people began showing up.
        We had a get by of fun at the party, but I was not watchful for...
seams like you just threw this essay together with either a fake or real essay. Couldve used more cathode-ray oscilloscope and adventures, but for a 3 paragraph short composition I guess it was ok. :P
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